Changes..

At the start of the film I replaced the bit where the girl touches her breasts as we felt that this was very inappropriate for an innocent pop music promo. I replaced it with a clip of me in Ally Pally running up to a telescope and looking into this. I think that this starts off as an establishing shot to set the scene that she's in Ally Pally, alone and broken up with Alex. It also can act as if she is looking down the telescope into the music video as it goes straight into the stop motion of L.O.V.E.

Opening Credits
We added in basic Times New Roman font the opening credits to the music promo in the bottom left hand corner. I did a bit of research into the credits at the start of music promos and realised that the lines go:
Song Title - Line One
Artist Name - Line Two
Album Name - Line Three
Production Company - Line Four

Seeing as we all have different album names as we all have different digipak's I found the third line slightly difficult to do, however with a bit more research into album names I found two different initials.
LP - Long Play
EP - Extended Play

Extended play is not a full album, but not quite a single. So the CD in the shop would have our music single, broken arrow and plus maybe two or three more. Seeing as all our digipak's have around 12 songs on it this would be the full album which is sometimes referred to as long play. So I will change the opening credits to Broken Arrow EP to mean the single and it will avoid any confusion with album covers.
Also I carried on our production name "SEEN producitons" from year 12 as it was easier and it fits with our group.